Clarification

I was just asking around about what does people think about my 'poem', and I recieved almost the same response from all. All of you DOUBTED that I wrote i, as the words that were used were so 'flowery' and it put across a real strong message (despair vs hope). I still remember somebody even describing it as something written by someone who has just being dumPEd!
 
So let me clarify this, I wrote the whole thing myself (actually its typed), so please don't try to find it in yahoo/google or whatever search engine. But I must admit that those words don't just flowed out of me like that, they were pretty much driven by emotions (actually there's a HUGE story behind it). To briefly say, lets just say that I felt kind of down and emotionally deranged and I wanted to make windmills for fun (or is it wind wheels? I just know chinese its called fenglun). The worse thing was that people around me couldn't understand me at all.......So I just expressed myself using some words. Anyway, I've since recovered especially after some heartwarming talks with a few good friends of mine which helped me to iron some things out and realised that things ain't that bleak! Haha